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Bcuz Of U
March 27, 2011
See this scar on my hand?
It's because of you it's there.
You made me feel like I was dreaming.
So I wanted to know if pain was still real.
Want to know a secret? It's real.
See my tears?
It's because of you they're there.
You were my everything.
Now you left me with nothing.
Nothing but my pain and sadness
You gave me so much hope that you were the one.
Then you took that all away.
See this poem?
It's because of you I'm writing this.
Maybe if you hadn't made all those empty promises, I'd still be with you.
See my pain?
It's because of you I feel this way
© Amy L., Delmar, NY
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This article has 9 comments.
augustsun02 SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 7:25 pm
Thanks! You know, if you want, I'll be more than happy to read some of your work.
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 7:22 pm
This is a really powerful poem. You're an awesome writer! Great job! :)
augustsun02 SILVER said...
on May. 15 2011 at 2:57 pm
thanks. glad you like it. :)
Fredwardness SILVER said...
on May. 15 2011 at 2:42 pm
A very sad poem, and..even though I suppose I can relate...it gave me a fresh perspective. I think you did a good job.
augustsun02 SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 10:11 pm
Glad u liked it. & I looked 4 ur story but I couldnt find it :(
bookworm29 PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:55 pm
I love it because I can totally relate.
augustsun02 SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 11:36 am
Well, I'm glad it had the effect I was looking for :)
And again, I totally loved your story. It's definitely my favorite :)
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2011 at 3:38 am
Very powerful. Wow ...
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